The plot is very interesting and the World Background is very good. Stability of updates is equally good. Character Design is good in respect of the 3-4 characters I have come across up to the 5th chapter.A few more dialogues in each chapter is what people had advised me and I am passing on the same here as well as shorter paragraphs.Writing quality is good a few typos and mixing of tenses which do not disturb the flow of the story.All the best.
