Depraved Hero's Path: Enslaved Monster Girl Harem In The Apocalypse! - Reviews

The chapters are a mess some chapters have chunks of other chapters in them to fill up three word count the men are constantly being called her and the women are called him and it has overall  bad translation and editing

Great Tang’s Unparalleled National Teacher is an interesting novel that is actually somewhat readable on MTL sites and is completely butchered by attempts at Westernizing it.  Dialog, world background , characterization all became terrible,  seemingly written for elementary school kids.  WHY?!   I mean does translation team think that folks going to Webnovel to read Wuxia/Xianxia novels would be confused by Chinese names or Great Tang?I strongly recommend folks skip this.  If the novel ever comes back properly translated, then it would probably be a treat, but we'll never know.

can't wait to read where the story is gonna lead to.

Ansakit ng ulo ko napa upo pa ako ansakit ng pwet ko huhuhu

'' Training will start tomorrow morning, you already had enough rest while sleeping 2 days, I will be in charge of your training you should be grateful '' said Ethan while laughing

Now Michael's licking the soupy deliciousness off my manicured finger, and the restaurant manager's in the corner giving us a look. We laugh discreetly, and I elect for feeding Michael with the spoon instead. The food's good, we don't want to be thrown out by our necks when we've only just begun.

Kuroka hesitated for a moment before eventually pulling her door open and gesturing for Shirou to enter in the same motion.

"Why yes and no? How can someone be half a prisoner? Someone is either one or not."

Ngayon, handa na akong harapin ang babaeng tuluyang kokompleto sa buhay ko. Sana ay 'di pa huli ang lahat. Sana ay ako pa rin kasi mula noon at hanggang ngayon, si Luca pa rin ang nagmamay-ari ng puso ko.

"You see that? It seems our friends are giving us a welcome party". Yelled Cassius to his troops and hearing him some of them started laughing.

Hello! This is the author making a personal review.As of this time, I think my writing quality is still good but not perfect, you know? It sometimes get dialogue-heavy and personally while I don't dislike it, a semi-paragraph can feel overwhelming for a webnovel.For story development, I am content. But I do feel like I'm not good at certain transitions.In terms of update stability, character design, and world background. Perfect! Cause, why not?Personally there are still so many things to write and this simple review will not deep dive on those (read my novel... please...).By the way, to those reading this.Thank you for atleast checking out my novel.I am beyond grateful.