So here's my review!Strengths:- Engaging post-apocalyptic world with OGI powers and hierarchy.- Action-packed scenes that keep readers hooked.- Superhuman abilities of the protagonist add excitement.- Mysterious characters like Mr. Mink create intrigue.- Flashback scene provides insight and hints at a larger story.Areas for improvement:- Abrupt transitions between scenes.- Pacing issues in certain areas.- Dialogue could be improved for better engagement.Overall, the story has potential with its engaging world, thrilling action, and mysterious characters. However, addressing the issues of transitions, clarity, pacing, and dialogue would enhance the reading experience. With these improvements, the story could become even more captivating and leave readers eagerly anticipating future chapters.
