Demon King and The Moon - Reviews

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"And uh, I am not from this planet"

One had the worse of lucks when alone, one had so much that it became a hazard for those around.

"Oh okay this is your 50 dollar." The man gave the money to Monster.

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For real this is one of the most refreshing novels I have read in a while. Author must be a master chef the way he has been cooking on this work.

I love this book please keep writing I need to know what happens next!!! Never give up this book keeps me on my toes for the most part and I love it!!!

This is the most amazing and exciting story I have ever read, y'all should try it too

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I think this is a good book, I like the blood knights shit and Rena op level up ability or whatever I think it’s pretty cool, you don’t get one scene with Lilith until like ch 18 and it’s not even the real her, it’s her in a trial, like brother it’s the whole premise.Also i have a strong inkling this is at least AI edited because, it’s not that certain phrases come up a lot, but when introspective dialogue about how a nighamisnt afraid anymore or is ready for what’s next. It’s just a bit annoying and the book would’ve got a 4 star if not for the sprinkling of slightly annoying corny monologue and dialogue when it  doesn’t need to be emotional. I know how it is, I’ve written thousands f words worth of fiction using ai, I can tell after like 4 chapters if something is ai written unless heavely edited by a human after. Other than that great story.

writing this review after ch 18 and You may be thinking that this novel is pretty slow that is because I don't rush things and slowly introduce more characters and more power system and need to make that system is not too op and if you have any questions about the novel feel free to comment and read until the chapter 18.