“Defeated by a Slender Waist” - Reviews

“Defeated by a Slender Waist”
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I love this story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Author, don't even think about abandoning this story or I will be mad. ????????????????
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excited to see more of the story! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Seems interesting enough but i think there should be romance
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So, I've read up to what only has been released so far which is chapter 20. And I'm not much or at all of a romance person. But I can say I enjoyed this for it's descriptive explanations when its going over the background and how the characters feel and their surroundings. I definitely enjoyed the discrepancy of it. It felt as if this was happening in real life as I was reading this. So the imagination and fantasy is definitely there.  Which it on its own is amazing, because it shows that I was immersed into the story. I love how you write at the end of the chapter on the author's thoughts about the summary of each chapter going on. One thing I do wish though, was that some parts of the story would be more fast paced. It felt fast paced for the first five chapters of the story and then it felt as if it dropped for a portion of it. But that's my own preference. But for the most part the characters are adept and seemingly real in their emotions and how they act.

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