I truly like the idea and the concept of this... the beginning was very good... there were some grammatical errors but we can turn a blind eye to them... as the story progressed I feel the relation of mc a bit forced... his sudden change of personality makes me feel like he is a hypocrite and its confusing, it happened many times, the author mentioned it many times that what his aim was by (A/N) and it irked me many times because people should be able to get what you are trying to convey by reading story only... as we progressed I started feeling I was reading a low tier cultivation novel except it is a magical world... And trust me I have read my fair share of cultivation novels and I could predict what is going to happen, so my thrill ends as soon as the author tries to bring the cultivation type of deal...