Holden did not answer back but only return a wicked smile. "It appears Nora brainwashed you and Fye so much. I don't have a choice but to this." Holden leaned his body and dashed forward towards Caleb's position and shouted, "I must kill him. Kill him right now!"
After spending a long time choosing my powers and bloodline and going through a few loopholes to get some OPness in my body, I felt as if that as long as he put in the effort towards training in the future he wouldn't lose to just anyone.
It’s not a bad start for the story but I feel like the author is moving through plot lines too fast. Slow the story down a little bit, flush characters out a little more. Read through first 30
The concept was nice, the character's development was slow and steady and really good to follow. I just have two problems: 1. world background, not sure if the settings are in the current era, future world where the city was destroyed and was still surviving or even in the past until I read up to chapter 12 when the system comes out. 2. using too much underscore, it is not a problem when reading but when you listen with audio.
