dancing of Zawadi - Reviews

"Mia, wake up. We have school. You too, Akira Tsuruoka. Here I was concerned for your health, but I'm sure you are feeling better considering you can grope a girl in her sleep."

"But! Now that you say so... I think you are right because, when you screamed just now, I thought for a second that I was seeing mys— *cough* an old friend of mine. I can't blame someone with your sincerity."

"Yeah, I know," Ichigo said before he looked up at Kisuke. "And I hope you don't forget about your end of the deal," Ichigo said causing Kisuke to flip open his fan and hold it against his face before he spoke in his usual jovial tone.

"I'll make sure to remember that." Instead, I told him that.

Maybe this translucent form was basically not his body but his . . . spirit?

       Zhu Ling Yu, using his Soul Sensing Art, felt the presence of a lone mortal soul fairly close to where he was sitting. Deciding to wait for it, as it was coming in his direction, he pulled out a basic manual on arrays to read as he waited. After all, he had all the time in the world. A few minutes later, the mortal soul appeared leaping through the trees, wearing a strange skintight outfit with... chainmail? 'How odd' Zhu Ling Yu thought. The mortal also wore a headband with a scratched out picture of a... spiral? He wasn't quite sure it had an odd point on it. He quickly caught the mortal with a basic array he had got from the manual, and had been practicing on for a year or so, to catch the fangirls, and sadly it had failed every single time. It had been rather vexing. The mortal flailed and tried to escape from the barrier and said some words in an interesting language that Zhu Ling Yu couldn't understand.

"You know a normal life is almost impossible, I know you are smart. I asked some of my colleagues to check your grades. Perfect until high school, then perfect seventies across the board. What happen Leland, why did you suddenly wish for a normal life?"

Shinji :"Because i want to adapt to world of killing first, if i reincarnate to these world of powerful lunatic i will be dead quickly, also this world people have suffer too much from demon i want to free them ".

Only shooting stars

So I just recently caught up and the book is good with some flaws but they get fixed. The main issue is the fact on chapter 424 the story is completed which doesn’t make much sense. I’m about 40 chapters away from where it “ends” and it just getting started in a lot of ways. It’s no where near the end so I assume it got canceled.Unless it continues don’t bother reading it.

Excellent story, compelling characters. Looking forward to seeing how this develops. Keep up the great work.