Although the idea was good, the execution isn't. The MC is almost brain-dead attacking people with obviously more power than him.
"Magnetism" MC:" What dat?"
His enemies are equally brain dead and keep talking to eachother all the time, changing their plan every few seconds.
Talent test: 'Do I even have to say it?'
Plot armor? I don't see anything else, he does attacks that come out of nowhere while he has 0 cultivation. Awakens system just as he was dying.