The story is awesome, but not to sound judgemental... I would have liked it more if you didn't describe more on what was happening. Like if it was a cliffhanging blurb.
Well,the book's all good all the way.
Come try this out, guys!
The story is going great, the main character's background story was sad, though I hope fate compensates for it, I'm gonna stick to the story cause it's worth it.
Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine
A very nice story.
I like the pace of the story. you really got me hooked into his journey of cultivation. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer part more though.
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A good start that was well-written and easily immerses in the readers. The plotline seems interesting as it progresses, drawing one's attention in. Good job!
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
dear author, the story is quite captive and a good deal of time. The story of high school students always got me. The ways his life changed after break up its interesting to read. keep it up dear.......
