If you follow us, you'll know that we're not into stories like these. But here we have Missnormal, who seems to wish to delve into her writing skills. Let's see what she has to offer.So the premise goes like this: survival is a challenge where a cruel game is mandated by a lottery system that selects teenagers to battle terrifying creatures. Hunger games? Nope. Divergent? Let's chill out now. Here we have the MC, Olivia, who seems like an ordinary girl until she's betrayed by her own family and forced into the game. What's the catch, author? Oh, she has a system. Ya know, those magic translucent prompts that pop up.While only five chapters in, it's evident things can get emotional. You'll know what we mean if you understand Freya's character. Again... Hunger Games, anyone?Now, there are tons of spacing issues that need to be addressed. The grammar, while not terrible, could also be improved for smoother reading. This tells us that Missnormal is still somewhat new when it comes to writing. I'll guess that she's a young adult, which is not bad.What might stand out about this story is it somewhat tackles the notion of how to survive a society structured around the powerful versus powerless. Sort of sounds like earth!
