I like snakes. Mal is a good boy..........................................................................................................................
the starting is about migration to another body.........but it is well written and the story development is quite good. I suggest you to write a better synopsis or either let it be, its overall good
I like how your story going, ?? it' show in future your story provide us more fantasy, mystery and power of characters supernatural chills. This novel delivers a adventure with a cursed coin, Spooky tales and hidden dangers.
The description or the hypnosis is very catchy. I hope that many readers will support this story after the trial. Because this story is certainly nice.
