cosmic outbreak - Reviews

"Hey, Danny how did you get those sex scandal of Fan?"

Shyn kissed him back until it was deepen and deepen and deepen..

I ducked under it, ramming my head into her armor.  The pain of impact cleared my head a little.  She directed the sword I'd ducked into the air, bringing the spike on its pommel down into my left shoulder blade.  On my knees, I grabbed her legs, driving my head between them, lifting her into the air, flipping her over my back.  

He was approaching no where and was losing hopes and was about to return when finally he heard the clearest voice from behind. When he turned back he saw a fairy image but at the same moment it got vanished away. He again become sad. He got tired and finally decided to rest. It was afternoon and dazzling sun rays were falling on his face and appeared as if sun was kissing him and adoring his beauty to keep him and his beauty up-to him.

"Assistant take him to the Purify room."

I'm liking the summary it's intriguing , I'm giving it a chance

Hmmm...Based on the first chapter alone:Apocalypse, reborn, and FL with a portable space that can store things and grow food—very similar to the apocalypse novel written by ColorfulAutumnWind.

The story isn't bad. Free chapters are a mess filled with over explanation of the power levels. I don't remember where but there is one chapter are exclusively filled with them. Right after almost same info. I was thinking to drop it when it become for money. But stayed and it become more interesting it still has a lot of heroes thoughts where he explains something umpteenth time again but it become not so obvious. Sometimes I even skip these parts to actual action and storry development. Overall author still keep me invested and I'm interested in being what will happen. but he need to quit explaining things. Readers not inbicils and we can think ourselves sometimes. If it will keep same way I don't know how long I'll be staying with this novel. I'm on around 70th chapters.