So many grammar mistakes. The story itself is good but the writing takes all the positives away from it. Definitely try to cure this. Other than that the story and characters are good and I like the development. I still enjoy reading this a lot.
Du Chan will become a legendary character, the world will remember. The story and character design is good although there are a few typos I hope the author corrects it. BTW is this a Chinese translated novel or an original work?
This book was fairly decent. I think the con system should be updated but had nothing to do with the book. Character development was good and even surprisingly even with other mcs.
It was quite good! Some of the scenes are quite realistic and the description is good. The plot in itself was quite interesting!Keep writing and best of luck!
I love this book, the first 20 chapters are weird, and i love how strange they are, but once you reach ch 50 you will see where the book truly shines, I suggest it to any perverts who like a little mother son action.
This is considerably fast-paced and not really as slow as what you'd expect from a novel where the MC originally had no powers, but that's okay, the author knew what he was doing when he made this novel in first-person, perfect for a fast-paced novel.
I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. The story is very captivating. Keep up the good work author ?
