Honestly quite horrible, granted tho I’ve seen worse. I can only assume those giving 5 star ratings aren’t native English speakers; or have received monetary compensation.
Grammar, sentencing structure and the overall storytelling is quite bad.
Now this is not me taking a shot at the author I commend you for trying, but readers should be given an honest account of what to expect.
My review applies to the first 12 chapters. Couldn’t handle more