Clash of Olympus - Reviews

    "Sudahlah, lupakan itu. Sekarang ceritakan saja padaku. Kenapa kau mendadak mau menikah?"

my name Lu Chi but often loves going by baptismal name Elizabeth shortened to be Liz.

First name: Lexa

After gently stroking my penis, the girl opened her cherry lips and wrapped them around my penis, voluntarily giving me a blowjob. With my penis wrapped in the warmth of her mouth, I felt all the blood rush to my penis and it was once again bursting with excitement.

"What happened out there?" Mandy immediately help Wendy stand straight and hug her. She was worried Wendy might have some injury and wounds, so she inspect every other parts of her body.

Bringing out a few documents from below the counter, she proceeded to examine them and paid no mind to Adrien while doing so. Pausing for a second in surprise, he started to look around and found the pair of Students that dined at the inn a couple of days ago.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

one more good collection among trash novels... pacing, story and characters are all good.... hoping for a mass release

Author-san, your book is amazing considering the fact that you are new to writing. some grammars are not so well written but doesn't affect the book. I like your main character and his interaction with his women... above all, he will make a good husband.

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??

Overall Everything is Good for now that is at least for me I do hope author read this comment as I want to say is that please do make mc use all his abilities in a useful way because currently he is too OP literally like final boss so rather then going around like some protagonists for finding opportunities to grow in power he should sit in high place and do the manipulating the final boss or villain does . There are lot of ways he can message with protagonists that appears like creating systems for specially that hates those protagonists like 2nd or 3rd rate villain give them opportunities so that they fight protagonists something like that and upgrade his family background to top level and they only listen to him as he keeps his eyes around his maids so that they get opportunity and get stronger and of some hidden people try to something to his plans he would kill them from behind and he can even create clone or something overall I want to say is if he is always in spotlight and people will keep coming to him for messing with him because they don't know his powers at that point it will literally become "slice of life" type story like where mc keep on face slapping while people keep on coming to him as we all know face slapping where mc literally gets into fight with anyone even beggar what I want to say is As mc here is op and like final boss so he should behave like one not go around the world and look for secret realms like protagonists does in typical storyline so they can get stronger.....Well this is just from my prospective hope author you do some think on wether my suggestion is right or wrong it's completely up to you to take it after if in later the novel transform into face slapping novel then I would have no choice but to drop it because I am too tired of slice of life or face slapping novels lately