Chronicles Of The Twin Guardians. - Reviews

Starts good enough and gets bad quickly. I don't know if the author just wants to pad the word count or what, but the pace drops off a cliff once you get further into the novel. It's like every single reference to any element of the world building requires a massive detour to explain all the details that will (99% of the time) hold little/no relevance to the story.Then, if you can imagine it, the pacing gets even worse. Imagine watching a movie where you pause it every 5 seconds  and then take a few minutes to describe everything in the background like it is of utmost importance (when it isn't, it almost always isn't).Now imagine that what you are giving up to get that level of detail is plot consistency. The novel has a minefield of plot holes. It's like playing an RPG where you have an open quest log that is pages and pages long of unfinished quests that show no indication of ever getting completed.I managed to slog through 600 chapters, but there has been a fair bit of skimming these last couple hundred channels just to make it bearable. Author needs editor, badly.

"Wow, that was so cool, how'd you do that, was that your semblance, ohhh~ your katana looks so cool, can I see it pwretty pwease." The girl in red hood rapid fired those questions and used a cute begging face, which had no effect as I had even cuter girls beg to me for gear and loot. So I've built up quite the resistance.

"Yes. Newly smuggled in from the North Kai!" Looking around, he lowered his voice and whispered conspiratorially. "I heard the Human Emperor of North Kai himself ordered these made and killed off all the jewel-makers seeing how one of a kind they were!"

Any-Maker, a medium sized gadget that resembled a box with a mirror on top. It is capable of creating and copying anything into existence!

Yg di cemburuin bapaknya lagi..???

Shameless Author Here:What to Expect:? A dark and gritty LITRPG with a structured progression system featuring unique skills, powerful classes, Orders, rituals, and ancient relics.? A world filled with political intrigue, warring factions, and betrayals at every turn.? Moral dilemmas, sins, and virtues—how far will one go for power?? Harem? Maybe. If readers want it, comment below.? Dark themes, but no non-consent. The protagonist may toe the line, but he won’t cross it.