Chasing my lover with the strongest system:futa - Reviews

"Tony siapa?"

With a success rate of 99% their group known as the "HeadHunters" was feared all across the globe.

Roy dan lainnya pun begitu terpana dengan pemandangan yang terlihat dari puncak White Mountains di mana hamparan salju dan awan yang terlihat menyatu, serta danau es yang terahampit jurang yang menyuguhkan pemandangan indah dan mistis. Roy yang pertama kali datang ke sini benar-benar terpana, dari dulu dia begitu ingin ke sini tapi karna latar belakang nya dia tidak bisa pergi. Melihat anak-anak yang begitu antusias bersama teman-temannya sekilas Roy merasa sedih karna dia satu-satunya yang tidak memiliki teman, karna dia sering di tindas di sekolahan sehingga teman sekolahnya menghindarinya. Ketika dia sedang terhanyut dalam lamunanya, terlihat Jennifer dan Lisa menghampirinya.

"What are you doing, Ukitake?"

"Polort Jagnar? From Kaserd? Then....it's you, Huh, You're Ugart's boy, Been a long time since I saw you, Last time you were just a little baby still sucking your mother's tit, Well... I think you two should come with me, I wish to catch up with you considering it has been....what 15 years now? Yes it has

i will release the first 3 chapters very soon in my new novel which is "one and all"....

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

A bullet penetrated his shoulder when he was going for an upper-punch. Thanks to his shoulder being damaged he could not properly move his arm in time, giving Okuyasu an opening that he was more than glad to take. Okuyasu bent his knees a bit to use them as a spring for an uppercut right into Skin's jaw.

" Are you one of the goddesses in Olympus? " he asked

man, I've been here since ch 20, and so far, the journey is worth it the characters  are to die for the Mc isn't brain dead and is smart and continues to lean from his mistakes the side characters are fun too you get emotionally  attached to them

I’ll come back when there’s more chapters

I haven't read this story, but I've reviewed the synopsis. The premise seems familiar: the protagonist, Mc, is betrayed by his friend, family, and girlfriend, which is quite common. In his second life, after dying, why does he choose to become a villain after experiencing betrayal? Take Naruto's Madara for instance; he was betrayed by Black Zetsu, much like many other villains in various stories.Instead of this predictable plot, why not portray Mc in his second life as someone who finds it hard to trust others, who is cautious and even prepared to resort to extreme measures like a suicide bomb if betrayed again? I dislike this synopsis because the protagonist seems naive; how could he not realize something was wrong with his lover, friend, or the people he cares about days or weeks before the betrayal? It's frustrating to see a character portrayed as careless and clueless.It would be more compelling to mention in the synopsis that Mc doesn't die alone but manages to take down one or two people with him before his demise. Hope author accept my critique, if you want to make another novel please.