Can The Defeated And Captured Heroine Still Be Happy? - Reviews

"Is this important to you to ask her to change FB id?" Arun frustrated.

"Of course, I will remember that before leaving." After he said that, Olga nodded her head and stood up before leaving with Chloe, who didn't forget to bow her head to Naruto something a Dark Elves had never done before to a human.

I wanted to go to music school but I had no one to sponsor me. So I got in to the same field as my father to spite him, get better than him and eventually fire him myself.

Al aclarar mis pensamientos decido volver junto a las criadas para obtener algunas respuestas, si algo me sirvieron mis 40 años como neet es a nunca ver por mal ninguna situación, Dios sera la fantasía de todo otaku la que me paso a mi, volver al pasado o quizás viajar a un mundo extraño, tantas cosas pasan por mi cabeza que no puedo parar de imaginar mil cosas distintas a la vez.

Ray: Shut the fuck up. TIME BREAKKK.

Sungguh malang ibuku, yang tidak bisa merasakan manis nya perjuangan yang telah ia berikan untuk keluarganya. Ketika semua nya tengah bersiap melangkah untuk sampai puncak, takdir berkata lain. Ibuku harus terjatuh dan hilang, yang tidak bisa menikmati keindahan puncak perjuangan. Dan sekali lagi takdir menghianati kami.

"AHHHHHH" Yoongi screams in pain, Chun Hei had held his hand and squished it tightly, making him fall on his knees and whine. Jimin was holding back his laughter from the distance and ran up to them, back hugging Yoongi and helping him up again. Chun Hei then smiles mischievously and starts walking away. Jimin then chuckles loudly while making fun of Yoongi, who rolls his eyes and tickles Jimin, he pushes his older away with all his strength, making him fall to the floor completely. "Are you getting weak, hyung?" He teases with a smirk. Yoongi laughs loudly; "Me? Weak? Ha, I don't fight back because I don't want to destroy your beautiful face." He stands up without struggling, the younger chuckles; "Sometimes I question your sexuality."

Only shooting stars

This is the second novel I'm trying. I hope people may like this, as there are very less fan fictions of cartoons. I wanted to create a better story but now other villains and heroines will be added. Please support my work and send me love❤✌

"Yes, shit ...." We answer in unison.

It's a good story quite the cliffhanger though I hope it updates more chapters soon!

The general plot idea of this chapter isn't too bad, though the writing quality could really use some improvements. Currently I'm waiting for the next update, and things are bound to get interesting. The development of the story is a but abrupt, and a lot of things could be tweaked to make each scene a lot more realistic, and lengthen the overall word count. The characters aren't too well introduced, and the description of the scenes lack action and impact. World backround is quite plenty though. Overall, it has potential in itself, just some extra effort.