the story itself is promising i like the way it opened the beginning of the story and i like the system, but the characters really do fall flat especially the MC the author is maybe trying to hard to be funny, like the mc i know he is mentally unstable cause of everything that happened but it’s not really fleshed well the author just makes him like annoyingly unserious because he’s insane like a really bad joker and spider-man combined, so it doesn’t flesh his character out well
