Bride Of War - Kumudini - Reviews

His ears twitched when he heard a small noise coming from the entrance of the cave, he snorted and turned back to face the entrance. His eyes watched the figure that appeared at the entrance with barely restricted hunger. But he would fight his urges and resist them, if only for who he was before he became....This.

Only shooting stars break the mold

The shoot-out paused. A few seconds later, Aelthred received a transmission from one of his warriors at front.

I just read the first chapter and even if it's enough to write a review I just couldn't read without say how the protagonist is interresting, many of the themes of this story will be insane I think

I love the story and the lore it’s building up the progress so far is nice with the mc becoming a god but the grammar is shit, it’s good for the couple chapter but then it start off with the mixing up of the church names making me confused and then I just read a chapter where their was no space every dialogue was jumbled into a paragraph . I’m trying to continue but plz fix these ecen if you have to use Ai to correct ur writing. This makes me feel like your tranlating a novel but messing up with simple mistakes