Bound by the Stars - Reviews

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"H~how did you do that let me go your a monster let me go somebody help me!!!!"

Only shooting stars break the mold

Streams of foreign memories entered her mind.

A small childlike green hooded creature ran through the kingdom and climbed a tree to see if it could spot Zalaria. The small creature spotted guards following them to the palace hiding in the bushes. The hooded creature made a run for the door into the palace. The sound of small footsteps stopped when the creature crashed into a servant knocking over. To keep the commotion down the creature threw a mushroom at the servant causing the servant to fall asleep. The creature tried to pull the servant to keep the body out of view. The creature sensed a presence but couldn't runaway. A guard had picked up the little creature.

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I like all the stories that you have written so far and that is also the case for this one, I find that this beginning is very effective, fast and puts the reader in the mood of the story instantly. The story seems to have themes such as horror and mystery that I like and are well transcribed. Plus as usual a neutral evil mc and I really like that. I wish you good luck author for the future, your stories are very interesting and I will continue to read them with pleasure.

it has a promising start I'm actually interested in where this is going