I wrote this, and I agree. It's around 200 words, which is way not enough. My next chapters will be longer (at least 1k words average) but this was a kind of prologue that I might change later when I have more time. But thanks for the honest feedback :)
Hey guys! Your lovely neighborhood editor here :P. Zhanye got drunk last night, so today's chapter is going to be late. If there is one at all. So if your reading this thank you for patience and understanding. ^_^
Excellent novel although it's still in it's initial stages it has huge potential. Definitely recommend to read this novel. The Details are good too. Keep up the good work Author ?
This is a xianxia inspired novel taking elements from modern day system rpg elements. Very promising start and the grammar is good, I hope the quality remains the same