Bloodlines of Betrayal - Reviews

He seems mentally unstable i should not bother him i thought.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Hello, author here!Here to explain and answer any questions about the book. Feel free to ask, remember there are no stupid questions!-"Who is the main character?": There's actually one "main" guy which is Saahad, but there are other characters that the novel will be in the pov of for world-building and to move the plot forward.-"Will he be overpowered?": Well he'll be pretty damn strong even from the beginning, but he can still be beaten and there are other things that are stronger than him. So, not...really overpowered.-"Whats your update schedule": I actually began writing most of the chapters for this novel since June, but I was on vacation and could not upload them. I'll stick to one chapter a day to give me time to proofread and change up some plot points as I go along, since I have an idea of how the story will progress.-"Whats your inspiration": Heavy, I mean HEAVY Warhammer 40k influence for the world-building, of course its not going to be a complete copy and there definitely will be more differences than similarities. There's also a sprinkle of starcraft and Lord of Mysteries.Please review the novel-the good, the bad, and the ugly- if you have the time, they do help me as a writer. With that I hope you enjoy the novel. I know I did!

I have only read so far, so I can't say much about update stability or world background, but my main concern is just how stupid the MC is and without any kind of common sense, it's actually quite frustrating to read, considering the MC has such a high intelligence stat you would think he had atleast a slightly higher intelligence then stupid people, but as of right now I can say the stats are definitely a lie.

well even if everything is okey but the point is this story feels hollow cause our mc just lacks motivation or doesn't have good motivation for story to progress. he just want to watch anime and that is his overall motivation.  mc action is compeltly driven by other people choice and story instead of other way around.  for example mc won't do anything unless some forced plot is upon him. he just want to maintain status quo and story is compeletly driven by author putting problem in his way.