Simple and straight to the point. Characters and their personalities are shown well via interactions, and the overall direction is clear. Some grammar could be checked again, like maybe the tense, or certain things can be just said as it is and not stretched out too far. Pacing for the story starts off well but there are moments were it's too fast, and may need build up for key moments like events and character development. Recommended for readers who enjoy an action packed adventure with an MC who clearly wants to rise in strength.
