BLACK VALENTINE THE CURSED NIGHT - Reviews

When she turns towards the source of the voice, she saw zero reach one of his hand with a bright smile that makes a rainy day turn a bright sunny day.

"I don't understand sir" Yinok said calmly glancing at Gong Suk whom she found looking at her as if they had known each other before. Due to she barely associate with men, she became cuddly uncomfortable.

She dialed Aniket's number and a male voice answered, "Hi, who is calling?" with some urgency in the voice as if he was expecting someone. "I am Nikky's friend; her childhood friend. I want to know about Nikky. Actually, I have some urgent work but I have not been able to make any contact with her. I called at her home also but they too are ignorant about her. Is there any way to get in touch with her?     You see, it is very important. She met me here yesterday but disappeared suddenly. She was telling me something but could not complete."

The Tuffles had been completely beaten, they were still better but the sudden change stunned them greatly. They were unable to counter attack, they could only retreat bitterly while dreaming of revenge.

Since James point in visiting the city had been accomplished, he decided to leave the town once again, to try and push towards level 10. One couldn't lag behind, otherwise they'd fall behind other players.

"Good morning, Jenny" I greeted the receptionist.  

His instincts pulled him to the center his steps jumping from one spot to the next to avoid small patches of still hot rocks and soil that burned the soles of his feet. His long claws grabbed a few branches and tore them away from his path and there in the center he watched the fire slowly dwindle to reveal a naked woman that was caressed by the flames but not harmed by them.  

I arrived at the front of the house and immediately knock the door.

I've gotten to chapter 75 - so far this is some of the best writing I have seen on this platform. I am a huge fan of the start of the novel...

Too much exposition in the beginning. Other than that the premise is still fresh and could be polished further