Part 2
Ohhh and worst of fucking all.. the douche of a writer loves to start spoiling his own fucking writing.. literally and I’m not talking about little side notes or messages at the end of chapters.. nah he does it in the middle of shit, just to point out this is important fact but it’s not, it it just vaguely says he’s going to be ruler and king blah blah blah stuff, like random characters keep talking about the MCs “destiny” constantly.. so I don’t feel like I’m enjoying it as much.. like the writer really didn’t try at all, everything is just generic copies, I don’t feel imagination, It feels more closely related to our views of mythology and gods and stuff.. not a fantasy manga about a vr video game..
Honestly speaking this could’ve been a masterpiece, being my 2nd fav but clearly this writer doesn’t have the talent TBATE has with the beginning after the end..
