Between Wings - Reviews

"That one with tight face,"she rubbed her chin."I don't really know about him what I now is he's a doctor. But if the doctor was like that I bet many patients going to die in fear,"she giggled.

"Jiminnie!" The other whined again and Jimin knew something was about to come. Something he wouldn't like. "I'm so sorry but I can't go with you today."

Suddenly, she lifted her head and looked directly in his eyes and said: "I decided to become a pokémon master and one day I will defeat you. "

Yes. Can i speak to him

A woman lay still under the concrete of the cafe, a man next to her clutching her arm, tears rolling down his cheeks.

"Hello? "Ye Ming Ming answered quickly. " What's the matter, Ling ling? "

It starts out with an info dump, but really picks up the pace and becomes good

Vey interesting story and plot. Hope the author will update more chapters as soon as possible

The author really needs to list triggers in his intro. I wasted time just to learn that the female lead is a yandere.

This is good. Its like a more of a movie script than a novel. The guns and machines were cool, and the army was awesome. The novel doesnt feel like a novel, its more like someone studied film and wrote a script. And sometines author adds characters on the side that needs to be explained, like a movie giving hints. But it doesnt work on this novel type

Here is my review of The Fool AscensionWorldbuilding: The worldbuilding of this world for me is quite okay as the set up with the heart of ruin and the effect to the rest of the world. I also like there are group of assassins that related with the heart of ruin. My feedback for this, to give more detail description regarding the world itself to make it more fleshed out.Characters: So far the characters are fines and I quite like the dynamic too in here. The main character, Jarek is witty with his delivery. Lena is mysterious and love to give a good roast. Their dynamic between each others so far are interesting and fun to follow. As for other characters, they are okay for now, just needed to be fleshed it out.Writing: I like the writing is quite fast pace, but fine to follow. The action is so far nice too.Overall, if you like action, fantasy, and heist, I definitely recommend this novel.