"Why are you helping them so much." He hoped he didn't sound bitter, it was disappointed he didn't get a reward like the stories but his disappointment is like being given a wrapped candy and found it wasn't your favorite flavor, nothing to cry.
The novel is beautiful and I love the title of your novel! The synopsis is great too, and yeah also the Chapters are good! Your writing is professional, anyways overall it's fine! Good luck! Waiting for other Chapters!?
Author here this is my first webnovel however i have high hopes for it.And i aim to listen to everyones feedback.And ill make a very rutheless mcAny questions pls ask ill answer below?
just doing this for the free chapter honestlyStory is good. We all knw what we are relly here for.Pace is speeding up nicely, fav girl so far is the housekeeper so hopefully we get some noice scenes with her