I like the story overall. It is very interesting and it certainly stands out in it's style. To each their own, the way that the story is described reminds me of some kind of strategy game. The levels and the way that people's power abilities are described throws me off. It's not really what I look for when reading a novel and makes it a bit less entertaining to me.
But to each their own because a lot of people seem to love it and uniqueness always has its merits. I think the writing quality could use a few minor improvements along with the formatting. But a solid story overall. Wishing the author the best.