Before Winter End - Reviews

"We need to get back in the game" Jamal tried to sound unflustered by the thought

(Dragneel) "You think a lot of things are myths don't you?"

"Why do you want to help me?"

Ehh i like itThere are things out of blue butThis is NOT that bad U could improve on plot A bit but otherwise its fine

The house was a mess.

Read till 55 chapters.Better than 90% same genre WNs.InterestingIt still lacks some thingsLike Fast paced , Fewtimes dialogue breaks immersion and character depths are lacking but good enough.Then world building and power scaling are okayish.I like your Villainess novel more.I would recommend you Young Master's POV.In that novel Character interaction, depths and power scaling are top tier with decent world building and good pacing depending on situation.Well good work.

One of my favourite novels, keep up the good work