Before I die - Reviews

Is he one of your students?

Bringin up the footage Mio tracked it back to two days ago and watched it.

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Level: 0

"So why are you here?" Ollie asked.

[Processing . . .]

"Of course not, they need the escorts. right?"

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

I think the writer is actually good. Just need to relax as you are writing, cos of the errors. I like how the story is going who would have guess a record player could do that(that's why it is fictional).I will love to know who murdered that Jane.

As the shameless traditions of authors, I shall too give myself a five-star review to myself. I believe this is one of my greatest creations ever.Haha, I will stop glazing myself. Just read the chapter at least until the free one. If you don’t believe me, I promise you a wild ride xd. Hope you enjoy. ? ?