Becoming a Monster - Reviews

A masterstroke of what can be considered an example of a novel that's laced with homophobic undertones. It follows the journey of a boy who fears and rejects male friendship and touch to become a ruthless killer but yearns for female love and attention so much so that he will show great mercy and compassion to them even if they want him dead. While he ruthlessly kills males and males are shown to be violent creatures, the main character hands himself and everything he owns over to a female who can offer him nothing and he does this for just a hug and a smile. One hug, one smile and all his strength (as he is the strongest among them) and everything he owns is given to the female. Noah continues to shun any kind of male interactions lest he be judged for having a "boyfriend". There is a deep message of discrimination in this novel and it tries to go the path of a simp to show where its taste lies.

I will try to leave an unbiased review even if author has come out as a violent homophobe

Noah, the main character of the novel embodies these values as he will do anything for a female but female villains will walk all over him and he allows them to attempt to kill him over and over

this kind of discrimination is taken to the next level, i cant believe people have this attitude in this day and age and think "boyfriend" is an insult

the mc is disgusting

This is a paraphrased transcription of the novel:
Simp: DIE VILLAIN
Female Villain: I AM A GIRL SIMP!
Simp: Sorry m' lady, please continue to plot against me
FVillain: that's right simp, simp for me
Simp: DIE VILLAIN! ONE MORE SHOT TO KILL YOU
FVillain2: WAIT SIMP! THAT MAN BELONGS TO ME, SAVE HIM
Simp: YES M' Lady even though he tried to kill me i will save him
Girl1: Simp you are the strongest around here, protect me!
Simp: YES M LADY!!!!
Girl1: I am weak simp...what will you do
Simp: TAKE EVERYTHING M' LADY TAKE IT ALL I LOVE YOU
Girl1: Simp you are going west? I am going east
Simp: I WILL GO EAST MY LOVE

Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too.
The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

Summary: Noah will abandon all his ideals for women, will kill strangers but enemies have plot armor thicker than the earths crust

Noah - MC - classic bullied past, allows himself to be bullied
has no problem killing anyone but enemies who he will save and let go for them to try and kill him again or poison people against him

quality of updates is good

story development so far is very cliche, you could copy and paste it

writing quality is better than MTL for the most part

character design....yea...i don't want to go there

world background hasn't been explored too much, entire time is in school

couldn't help my self from joining to check out this novel after seeing the screenshots. I won't go off my personal feelings.

Quality is okay, it's readable but you need a new protag, this one isn't cutting it

this dude is just too bland

good luck though, don't let the screenshots get you down...eh...whatever

मैं इस कहानी का आनंद ले रहा था जब तक कि उसने लड़की को बचाना शुरू नहीं किया, फिर एक और लड़की आती है और वह उसके लिए पागल हो जाता है और साजिश वास्तव में उसके साथ मजबूर महसूस करती है जो बुरे लोगों को बचाती है जो उसे चोट पहुंचाना चाहते हैं लेकिन वह दूसरे को मारता है जैसे हम जानते हैं कि क्या ह ाेती है

our mc has a volatile, unstable personality that changes from chapter to chapter and by his creator's mood, the world is not explored or explained and the synopsis is vague, the main character is also easily classified as a simp