Becoming a Bread Bag Villain in a Superhero Story - Reviews

Becoming a Bread Bag Villain in a Superhero Story
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"A promising beginning for a compelling 'villain' tale. Through Chapter 13, the protagonist's power and his unique position within the power dynamics have captured my interest. Although there are occasional grammatical inconsistencies when transitioning between male actions and female reactions (such as: Robert devoted himself wholeheartedly, yet she faced a setback. Upon hearing this, Rose felt he deserved a second chance), the narrative remains generally smooth. I genuinely look forward to the continued work of both the translator and author, as this story is a delightful read. I'll be regularly checking for updates on my phone, eager to see where the story unfolds."
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amazing I loved it

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