Ayooofkers - Reviews

"Okay then, I'll see you at the end of the day," Raul said.

Pietro fires a lance rocket, destroying the vehicle before it became a problem. We made quick work of the remaining Imperials.

Feeling anxious

read a few chapters and so far the story seems pretty solid, there's room for improvement of course, but it's good for a fresh novel

Dude, rewrite this as your original work, you're losing money, this is very good, and regarding references to movies you make, simply change a character in the name, for example: " November 17 " = " November 19 " or change a word = " December 17