Awakening: Chronicles of Astra Prime - Reviews

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HP: 4000

?: Congratulations child you have just won the lottery.

"Uh, what, oh right, um I was thinking on the second to last day of school. You know that way they can't do anything to us if they ever find out it was us that did it, and I mean really what are they going to do if they catch us, were graduating, I mean they can't take the diploma away, its practically already in our hands. Oh and also they have to clean on the last day." I said proudly. This prank is in the bag and its gonna be awesome.

Next, the lances. These ones look a bit similar to the Federation SB9. Hard to really see any difference since the gun itself looks really similar to the old models Roswell used. But the rockets are what took my attention. They don't look like the regular lance rockets we used. They look more like torpedoes with a sharp tip.

Miria: -Gasp-

The brothers was jolted by the sudden explosion and open their eyes immediately. They saw a man wearing blue hanfu standing at their front looking at the smoke like a god. They followed the man's line of sight and wait for the smoke to disappear and they were shocked by what they saw. The beast that is chasing them earlier is now become a roasted skeleton scattered in the ground.

Espeon "I have never met a Pokémon as arrogant as that Houndoom I want to get even with him, but I can tell from watching the conference he has stepped into another league again as he is at least pseudo champion level. Letting be even with fewer of the weaker legendaries" making me feel shocked a bit as she never backs down

"Always looking, always watching and never is where we think he is."

"Opzzzz ... I can feel the presence of supernatural beings in you."

Good plot and world background , unique writing style , i'm waiting for more chapters  keep it up