Promising start by the author. Descriptions are so vivid they allow you to picture what's happening every step of the way. I did get confused by the formatting of speech but i got used to it as I continued to read.The world building could be setting up the story for something bigger, but that could be just my speculation. Still, it's promising The mc is uhh...I don't know how to describe her, I haven't encountered such a character before so it's hard for me to draw up a description that would do her justice Overall it's a pretty good read, granted you are into fast pace books
