Astrum Oceanus: Initium Tales - Reviews

Crigil screamed as he continued to beat down on an Ogul in front of him that continued to try and snap his body and legs as well.

Shirou's expression remained passive, taking note of the way the man arrived. A hole had formed in the dimension of the fake Karakura Town around him.

Azon: they can't see me either.

Demikian beberapa contoh cerita humor terlucu, tergokil, dan terbaru. Semoga menghibur.

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

Dark chuckled. "Hu hu, you must be curious, right? Well then."

This guys novel are just on another level.

so far so good, but just another generic romance novel?u200d♂️

Hey, you! Yes, you. Is there anything you want to ask me? Then ask me

Alright, this is my first review on this app (so Sloth, you can feel proud about it ?).As you’d expect from Sloth, who is, in my opinion, one of the best authors on this app, the writing quality of this novel is top-tier. When I read, I feel completely immersed in the story, and I can’t wait for the next chapter to be released.The world-building is still in its early stages, but from what I’ve read so far, there’s a lot of potential for depth and creativity. I’m excited to see how it unfolds as the story progresses.The power system in this novel is particularly unique. Kael’s (MC) talent to transform beasts with even a trace of dragon bloodline into full-fledged dragons is an interesting concept. It also adds emotional depth through the “Shared Growth” mechanic, where Kael grows alongside his dragon companions, which makes their bond even more significant.As for Kael himself, from what I’ve seen so far, he actually uses his brain (unlike many other MCs in some novels). Of course, there’s still room for character development, but that’s to be expected since we’re still in the early chapters.To conclude, this novel has great potential. With Sloth’s fantastic writing, the power system, and the promising world-building (even though it’s not fully fleshed out yet, I trust Sloth—he never disappoints), this is definitely a story to read. Give it a shot, guys.

Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable.The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors)Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted)Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long)Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters)World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet)PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.

The story starts with an interesting idea, combining growth, power, and a unique world. The pacing is normal, making it easy to follow, and the challenges faced by the protagonist are meaningful.The writing is clear, though minor grammar issues might distract some readers. Overall, it's a promising start with good potential for improvement and development.