Astral God Black - Reviews

There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system,  

However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.

All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.

Simply awesome. Powers are awesome.
Powers are good
World development is good
Characters are mythical,(as in, they act like gods in Olympia)
Description and wording makes the fictional world into fantasy.
And story actually progress.
The MCs character is alive, thou super arrogant, even if he's a future god, he is not yet. what good will it bring to humiliate everyone you see and approach you. Treating someone like a person does not make MCs less godlike.
Though having exact number on how many spirit he actually have is better, it make us guessing but does not Remove the mystery

Simply awesome. Powers are awesome. Though having exact number on how many spirit he actually have is better, it make us guessing but does not Remove the mystery. The MCs character is alive, thou super arrogant, even if he's a future god, he is not yet. what good will it bring to humiliate everyone you see and approach you. Treating someone like a person does not make MCs less godlike.
Powers are good
World development is good
Characters are mythical,(as in, they act like gods in Olympia)
Description and wording makes the fictional world into fantasy.
And story actually progress.

Please vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote. Really nice novel but I wish it had more chapters

This is one best novels that I have read, despite its grammar mistakes. The way that the author carries the story out is the best and the plot line is neither fast paced nor slow paced. That is something very rare to see in most novels.

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