ASTRA: Book One - Reviews

David scrolled through the store in order to find a nice pair of revolvers to complete his look.

aakash-  divya wo shadi se pehle se mujhe koi psnd tha isliy maine tumko apnaya ni..aj mai btana chahta ki wo or koi ni tum hi ho..maine tumko delhi mai red light pe black saree mai apne friends ke sath dekha tha or dekhte hi tumse pyar ho gya tha..

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

18/11/09

story is fantastic it is one of the main reasons I even still get on webnovel anymore plz don't drop anytime soon

The main character seems to be an interesting guy from the first chapter

great world building and storytelling. One of the best web novels i've ever read. It is very enjoyable to read and you never get bored trust me. Just try it

hello this is Author, I am not beneath reviewing for my own novel, the novel is good. you might find some small mistakes like casing but as a reader they wont really make much difference.  read if you want your mind blown and loose sleep on what's going to happen next.

Everything in this novel looks beautiful. The writing, the wording, the characters, the emotions, the conflict, the mystery, the questions, this story has it all. The character design is really amazing, the plot of this story is rather unique, and the interactions from character to character really feel real. The landscape descriptions and the actions of some parts are very dynamic and fluid. I can easily picture a scene inside my mind with these chapters. I like how you plan ahead and make this world truly not empty.Keep up the good work, and continue to write!