Ashes And Embers - Reviews

Author. Please tell us if you decided to drop the novel or not.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

They were so loud that there voice could be heard upstair and Zakira who was sleeping woke up because of them. Since she was on the edge she felt down because of them.

'I'll get there. Now, coming to Alexa; she has black eyes like mine.'

"Pride potion." Dark smiling with a dark smile.

Given the writer’s point about the book itself it seems like a great book for anyone interested in romance, love and the system I suppose

The story is great giving the feel of a classic Shounen Anime / Manga story... There are lots of dialogues yet it was all well-written that it doesn't look and feel like I'm reading a script. The pacing of the story is quite slow at the start and I'm kind of expecting that the plotline introduced in the synopsis would immediately start but besides that everything is great. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author?