Ash & Abyss - Reviews

It seemed that was it.

"The level of trust you have bestowed onto me. I am truly grateful." Serpent furled his fist. "I guess you had faith in me. You must have predicted that I'd never dare to kill you."

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

"Oh okay this is your 50 dollar." The man gave the money to Monster.

"No, Fritz, I already asked my friend, he said he were not done yet too , it is too difficult he said desu."

It’s as gritty as I expected and I’m here for all that, wish I could chain the author to his keyboard for faster updates

Beautiful story …couldn’t get enough of it…

It's not often I read a book that revenge's so hard lol. I'm enjoying the book so far...the world setting has some hentai logic, so be warned.  the book is very H so it shouldn't be a problem if that's what ur here for.  NTR post script:So far the MC has protected his relationship targets, can't speak for later, but it looks like there isn't the "MC getting cucked" form of ntr in this book. Personally, I don't mind that kind of ntr if it serves the plot (even tho It does give me anxiety lol) , but totally understand how triggering it can be to people.. so I'm mentioning it since I've seen some people ask in comments. I really like the system, it's better than most dating systems I've read. Reminds me of "the affection multiplier" in how it works.

Not me waiting for the triple threat. I stan that red-head sociopath character EHE

Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!

Great idea for a twist to the reincarnation genre of fantasy. The prologue was wonderful, it gave us a small glimpse of the world building from the get go. Big time skip at the beginning, great comedy laced in the undertones of the story. Overall great read if you want a story that is of the reincarnation genre and does not disappoint or bore you.