First off Super amazing plot with tons of potential. But when it come to the MC I often wonder if he has a brain in that head of his. He doesn’t try to make full use of his future knowledge especially when it’s most needed in the beginning. He has to come up with a new invention that even the future doesn’t have in order to make money, (BTW it’s an invention that is way overpriced) instead of using one of the thousands of invention that were made in the next 1500 years. Overall I hope you can give the MC a big IQ boost and let him take advantage of his future knowledge a lot more. Also you should check out the book “END OF THE MAGIC ERA” for inspiration and examples of a smart mc, cuz it has the same plot as this novel.
