Wow. This is a new tale to be familiar with. What myth did this come from?Writing Quality. Great writing style. Updating Stability. Consistently updated. Story Development. The pace wasn't so fast but it's a bit slow. Character Design. Described along way. The hero is a teenage boy with a big dream but is more pulled by responsibility because of his father's death at an early age. He sounds more mature than his actual age, doesn't he? World Background. Interesting village from old times with men wearing loincloth.I look forward to Mmwana's journey to be the best warrior that he will become. Keep going, author!
