Art of Murder

Review of the first 15 chapters~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~If someone were to live for 10 thousand years, then his actions would be very different from a normal human.Our MC supposedly lived that long and yet acts like kid, it's mentioned times how arrogant he was in his previous life and how strong willed he was and yet again act like a kid.Somewhere in the story he get kicked out of his class and he gets shocked, i don't see why a 10 thousand year old Being, who fully knew how bad he was performing and how his teachers hated him gets shocked by such decisions. His background is just for show and never really reflects on him. The story doesn't adds up, its like the author had bunch of ideas but didn't know how to stick them together so he just decided to mention all of them without making a relation.

Not bad but the sign in thing is overdone now and so is the cross dressing love interest thing.                                                   

In Qin Xingxuan's heart she was truly surprised and was trying to not reveal her complex emotions. There were 3600 foundation lines, and it was absurdly difficult for an amateur to remember them completely. It wasn't too strange to say that Lin Ming knew this one foundation line, but what startled her was the 'shock' symbol he drew was completely correct; the energy was placed in the right spots and it was simply astounding. This could only the results of painstaking effort during practice!

Jin

"I hope you don't make a move tonight." The shadow mutters while looking over at the forest. "I don't want to be the one to ruin such an important night"

With the finger working to stretch him out, Ai shuddered as he wrapped his arms around Wang's neck. His face flushed as he moaned out, After a while when his body got used to the size of Wang's finger, his hips began to move, his mind unable to realize how lewd his body was becoming thanks to the heat.