Apocalyptic Survivor - Reviews

"Hm,.. jam 21.57.." jawab Rezza sambil melihat jam tangannya. "tahu gak kak, kata papah Jeni kalo ada cowo nganterin cewe pulang sebelum jam 10 malem tu tandanya cowo itu cowo bak-baik…" Jeni tersipu malu.

I walked downstairs to the kitchen to find all of the family getting breakfast and laughing about things. I hate morning people.

As we about to begin to traverse this unique desert, for some reason, all my kids who can't fly request that I carry them through the desert. Of course, I don't really mind. With some on my shoulders and arms, I walk begin to walk through this desert.

"W-what?" she asks, wondering what he meant.

She was forced to reveal herself and enter the building in order to sate her curiosity.  Silvana could feel reverberations of a dark power in the building, so she drew out ten percent of her aura as she entered.  

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

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"Yes, but don´t misunderstand me. We are not doing this as a favor to you or even as a way to establish some kind of relation, even if that might be a side-effect. We just don´t want a bound between the Gremory and Phenex families. Your Faction is trouble enough for us like it is. We don´t need the Phenex Clan get involved into Maou business as well. That had been our only interest from the beginning."

"Oh Lilith, what's wrong?" Light asked, who just woke up from the bed.

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Above is shameless review by author?"Grateful to everyone reading this story. I'm always learning, and your support means everything. Hope you enjoy the journey as much as I do!"