The carriage drew closer to them, it's shiny exterior glittering in the sunlight. The horses that pulling it trotted contently as they followed the street.
Faine jumped at the sound of a woman's voice. Hen he turned around, he saw a woman in a dark cloak and beady eyes staring straight at him. Unbeknownst to him, it was the demon goddess Violetta. "You're the last of your kind, of our kind."
Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of. Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.