That was a nice story, I like how he had a normal life but was forced to walk down a darker path, definitely continuing to read it. I like how Shen Yuan struggles with his emotions, like us.
The plot is very simple, but the storytelling is quite interesting to read. The narrative is quite easy to understand. However, it would recommend you to split or seperate some long paragraph and make it more easier for reader to read. Overall, this work is quite well done and I like it. btw, her dad have an affair with her friend 9 year ago. isn't that mean he is pedo?
