"Ye Mu Xi.." Lirih Xan Xan, Ye Mu Xi tidak menyahutnya dia masih bengong, "Ye Mu Xi...." Teriak Xan Xan gemas. Ye Mu Xi kaget dan tersadar dari lamunan nya.
Bro very upset with your second arc ending. I was expecting something better by the end of second arc. Little Spoilers->But all I see are failure, failure, loss of memory and still no body. End of Spoiler. The purpose of your MC is entertainment but the same can be achieved from watching TV or reading novels also( Like we are doing). So I cannot continue to watch your character make a clown of himself. It feels stupid without a real good motivation. You can get entertainment from anything. Just simply by watching ants also. So why make something so easy something so complicated.
Great story, interesting protagonist, and looking forward to more. The only flaw is that the transitions between periods are done somewhat crudely, otherwise the development is reasonable. Keep up the good work.
