An Echo in the Mafia (Echo Reid, Reid Family Book #1) - Reviews

The story has potential, but the grammar needs to improve.

WORTH TO ADD!I give five stars for  this story because this story deserves it.  At the beginning of the story, Hiro appears as an annoying little brother and I hate him but I also like him ? The author managed to make the characters very well that's why i like this story.  I also really like the world background, reminds  me of Sao, by Reki Kawahara.  love it 100%

I genuinely enjoyed this story so far. Only had 18 chapters but was very enjoyable to read. Looking foward to new chapters to see what happens next.This story has great potential and is a nice smooth read. Highly recommend so far the first 18 chapters are worth a read.

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Amazing story.  I just love this book...one of my favorite stories. Eagerly wait for Sunday to read it. I hope Rishika will get happy ending. Keep it up ??

Don't waste your time this is a troll. complete bs using the system which is still in beta. the whole novel is a beg for votes. the dumb idiot wrote a line or two and copy posted it into 7 chapters. Please remove this abomination from the novel list.

Hello Author, I have reviewed your boik and it is quite nice read.If you are looking to distribute your book or future books on a platform that will pay you up to 400$ based on word count and publishing frequency, then mail [email protected] A brief summary and link of your book will be appreciated when  reaching out.

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"Little lady? Are you alright?" His voice is laced with concern now.

"Most surprising! I had a house in Thessalonica!" The came closer to Lucius. "I've never heard about these strange clothes and sandals neither from Greece nor Cyprus. Believe me, I would know. I have traveled my fair deal myself. You strike me as a most curious person. You don't look nor sound like a Cypriot; your accent isn't Greek or Egyptian; but still, you didn't correct me when I called you Cypriot." The man seemed to grow taller and severer. "What is the truth, foreigner? Where are you from and what are these objects?"